I was born
at that time thoughtbelieved
I lived the best part of my life in t
o a more unfamiliar,
civilized and ethnically diverse,
I hoped that wouldn't pose a serious problem because I have a trait of easily adapting to different places
I don't think you really need that sentence.
Schooling was next.
I was to spend only
two terms in the school before graduating to high school so I had to make a long lasting,
myself and my academic excellence in a short w
Something done by other pupils in six-years was left to me to do in two-terms; not even a year.
That is something the admissions officers can probably figure out for themselves, there is no point in using up valuable space repeating something you just mentioned in the previous sentence. Say something new and personal that the AOs don't know yet.
This is interesting, you definitely show that you are hard-working and determined.