Chemical engineering is a branch of science that applies physical sciences (physics and chemistry) together with applied mathematics and economics to produce, transform, transport, and properly use chemicals, materials and energy forms a vital part of the sustainability of the humans.
Over the years I developed a great interest in the basic sciences and applied mathematics as I came to know of its role to satisfy the daily needs and its importance in progress. Its role in designing ecologically friendly energy sources, protecting the environment by new ways to tackle the increasing carbon dioxide emission and limiting global warming and more.
During my secondary level education I equipped myself with the basic knowledge of the subjects in order to understand the advanced concepts. I tried to understand the principle underlying each chemical phenomenon and how each principle was derived. To do so, I had to understand the textbooks thoroughly and supplement my classroom education with information from the Internet, the library, the lectures and other sources. This way, I tried to equip myself with the basic courses like Physical Chemistry, Calculus, inorganic Chemistry and organic chemistry.
A chemical engineer develops and designs chemical manufacturing processes. Chemical engineers apply the principles of chemistry, biology, physics, and mathematics to solve problems that involve the production or use of chemicals, fuel, drugs, food, and many other products. I AIM to do that and use this knowledge to serve the society and mankind.
<UNIVERSITY NAME> has held the record of being a distinguished name in the field of chemical engineering. Under the guidance of your renowned faculty i would be able to get the absolute guidance and knowledge.
My extracurricular activities include playing Basketball, Swimming and Cycling. I also have been actively participating in events relating to acting. I am confident that graduate study at <University name> will help me develop my overall personality.
Thank you for considering my application.
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Also kindly suggest me some points which can be added as to why i should pursue my degree from their institution and some extra points if possible.
thanks
Abhay, there is a need to revise your essay because you did not really write a statement of purpose. It does not contain the proper SOP information that is required by the universities. If you won't mind writing a new essay, we can most likely come up with an acceptable statement of purpose for you.
First of all, you don't need to define and explain what Chemical Engineering is and what work is entailed with the occupation. You are dealing with professionals in this field who will just get bored by your constantly telling them information that they are so familiar with, boredom has set in for them already. Instead, present the reason why you want to pursue a degree in Chemical Engineering.
Talk about how your interest in the field developed, what you hope to gain by studying this field, your plans for your future based upon the training you will receive from the university, and what your immediate plans are after graduation. Whatever you do, do not tell them that you need financial aid to attend college. There is a different set of student loan applications or scholarship application packets from the university that will better allow you to discuss your immediate financial needs.
Just focus on your desire to become a Chemical Engineer at this point. Make your desire to become a professional in this field, and what innovations you hope to pursue or establish during your studies or after you graduate. That is the kind of information that will be most enlightening and better introduce your purpose as a student to the reviewer.
Abhay, I agree that what you have does not really correspond it's purpose.
You definitely need to write a new essay, following the rules of an SOP, statement of purpose as the essay is called.
It should outline your drive as well as inspiration is pursuing such course.
I have a few guidelines below that will hopefully get you started with your new essay.
- know what the course is ( this part is a take away as you know exactly what course you want to take)
- know the rules and challenges of the course and how are you going to overcome the
- in academics, what do you have that will step up your game in the competition of all the
other engineering students
- what can you contribute to the institution as a future alumni
Lastly, keep your essay to a minimum of four paragraphs and in the final one, inject your personal insights toward the institution, the people ad the community as a whole.
I hope to see your new essay here on EF so we can assist you further.
