Chemistry/ Small classes/ Activities/ Events; WHY PHARMACY? WHY MCPHS?

Hi! This is my 250 word essay on why pharmacy and why MCPHS. Hopefully it's good but just to make sure :)

Throughout my years of study, I have been appealed to subjects that involve science and math. I found myself captivated by each lesson we learned, the challenges aroused me every time, and I developed a passion to discover how different interactions between chemicals are used for different purposes. My senior year of high school was when I realized that instead of pursuing a career I would like to do, I should seek a major I will enjoy, applying my skills and interests. Pharmacy was what came to mind and I was never so sure.

I was more and more motivated each day finding reason after reason for why it's the best career for me. It enables me to reach my career goals due to the wide range of opportunities and the excellent earning potential it offers which is all rewarded after a short period of study time. Providing relief and accommodation for those in need and in some future being the one to be there for my family for emergencies and health problems inspires me.

I chose a 0-6 program at MCPHS. It will provoke me to devote my time and knowledge to achieve my goals and success throughout. It's a private college located in a beautiful environment. It's a smaller school so the relationship between teacher and student is a lot closer than other larger schools. The activities and events they hold help students be active through out there years of hard study. Everything I look for in college is at MCPHS.

This essay as is sounds very generic and plain; I did not learn anything about you. As I read your essay, I keep asking myself, "Oh, why does she want to do this? Why does she like that?" Why do you want to go to a smaller school? Do you talk a lot in your high school? Do you come from a small family? Do you learn best by interacting? What specifically is in Boston that you like; it has to be more than just "a beautiful environment". What activities do you want to participate in there? Why don't you want to go study as an undergraduate for four years at a college first? How are you so sure that Pharmacy is right for you? These are some of the questions I want to know the answers to, the questions that you need to answer to make your essay less boring and more "you".