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'Choreography allows me to purse dance' - Johns Hopkins- Tell us about yourself


babygurl2012 4 / 15  
Dec 18, 2011   #1
Freedom to move passionately in order to purse an exceptional performance. Choreography is my pastime. Work, volunteering, academics, and extracurricular activities lead my busy schedule, but in the midst of it all I still indulge within my love of dance.

Before my family hit financial hardships I was a competitive cheerleader and loved the rush I felt during a performance. I still hold onto my love of dance and in my spare time choreograph my own routines. Music works in wonderful ways because it provides the balance and rhythm I need to produce an entertaining routine. My choreography represents my style and personality. I stay true to my methods and share my dances with other aspiring performers.

Every few months at Cypress Academy I get to teach my routines to a group of girls whose family's struggle financially and can't afford dance classes. Having been in the same shoes as them, I became their dance teacher and gave them the chance to dance as performers and forget about the worries at home. As a young girl, I did not have the same opportunities to pursue my desires, and the girls I choreograph are true talents because they don't let struggles stand in the way of their pursuits.

Dance unites us all together because movement is universal. Choreography allows me to purse dance in my own way and instructing others in the art of dance is an honor because our passion for dance overrides the adversity which surrounds us.
smtz88 1 / 6  
Dec 18, 2011   #2
Every few months at Cypress Academy I get to teach my routines to a group of girls whose family's struggle financially and can't afford dance classes. Having been in the same shoes as them, I became their dance teacher and gave them the chance to dance as performers and help them forget about the worries at home. As a young girl, I did not have the same opportunities to pursue my desires, and the girls I choreograph are true talents because they don't letdo not allow their struggles to stand in the way of their pursuits.

Dance unites us all together because movement is universal.

I'm not sure what you want to convey by your first sentence, but perhaps if you add it at the conclusion, it will put everything together and fit with the rest of the essay.


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