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Applying to colleges and universities is a tedious task that takes a lot of researching as well as time to think through it all. Finding the right school is just as hard. There are many different factors to look into when deciding what school is right.
I feel UCF is the right school for me. My goal is to Major in Biology, with the intention to pursue a career in the Medical field. In applying to UCF I feel I can accomplish and obtain my goal. As well as gain the "college experience". I would be able to leave home, which would enable me to learn to live on my own, mature as well as value everything my parents have done for me so far.
When I decided to apply to UCF I thought about the various opportunities UCF has to offer. If accepted I would apply to the various clubs, take part in as much school activities and try my hardest to maintain outstanding grades.