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College App 'Engineering is my dream'


c0mputerz 1 / -  
Dec 16, 2011   #1
How did you learn about NJIT and why are you applying for admission?
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I came across an NJIT representative last year and found out that the eminent NJIT was an in-state university and offered a variety of engineering degrees. I've learned about NJIT through various articles, ads, and the praise from fellow classmates and read about its diverse community and scenic campus which I soon hope to be part of. NJIT would be a great place to learn about people from different backgrounds and experiences from their programs, for example, the Muslim Student Association which is a social group for Muslim students on campus. Immediately I realized that this was the school for me.

I have always had an interest in computers and other types of engineering, such as electrical or civil engineering. Understanding the components of a computer is very interesting to learn and so I want to expand my knowledge of the internal parts of a computer at NJIT. Thanks to the guidance I received from educators and college fairs, I found that NJIT can give me the most comprehensive learning experience possible. Furthermore, the printed literature I've read about the campus location suits me perfectly.

My childhood passion for computers and machinery lead me to pursue a career in computer engineering. I have vivid memories from when I was a little boy. For example, I loved to disintegrate and assemble back small toy cars, airplanes, or any other models in order to learn about its mechanisms. I would examine my father's computer, open programs, and click buttons to appease my curiosity of each operation. These were some examples of the methods I used to develop my skills and enlarge my knowledge throughout my life.

Engineering requires ingenuity, motivation, and hard dedication. I am eager to be a part of NJIT's engineering program and contribute to the world of technology for a better future of mankind. Attending NJIT would not only allow me to become a professional, but also succeed in life and show the world that dreams can come true. My strong ambition to become a professional engineer leads me to apply to NJIT.
mursel 6 / 12  
Dec 17, 2011   #2
ads it is informal write advertisement
its you are talking about a lot of things cars, airplanes, or any other models you can writ their
Alicegz 2 / 25  
Dec 17, 2011   #3
Here are some of my suggestions:
through various articles, ads, and the praise from fellow classmates and I've read about its diverse community and scenic campus, which I soon hope to be part of

NJIT's programs would be a great place to learn about people from different backgrounds and experiences from their programs, f. F or example, I would love to join the Muslim Student Association, which is a social group for Muslim students on campus. Immediately I realized that this was the school for me.

Furthermore, from what I have read in the printed literature I've read aboutof the campus, I have realized that its location suits me perfectly.

By print literature, do you just mean a brochure? If so, just write brochure instead.

I would love it if you could help me with my essay too:)


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