I pursue being a student at Emory because of the College of Arts and Science
I wish to attend Emory's _(good adj)____ College of Arts and Sciences.
are a primary reason I hope to be admitted
are the primary reason I hope to attend Emory
I'm not a fan of this, to be quite honest. It feels a little insincere to say you want to go to a University because you have used their research materials.
You give reasons that were applicable in high school, not so much college. Maybe add some more personal aspects