As a child, I was forced to see my mother struggle to support my sister and me. I watched
that my mother had to do very difficult jobsmy motherwork a series of odd job, rangingthat ranged from a cashier at a fast food restaurant to a maid at a motel. I had to watch my mother,
thea woman that I love so deeply, get treated like she was worthless.
and I began to fall in love with it
It is not a good sentence because Stanford is not you partner to fall in love with it.
Throughout my research I found that Stanford represented the things that I need.
What do u exactly need?
I looked forward to
theget a chance to apply to the research honors track within the Department of Political Science because my current university does not offer
thean opportunity to participate in an honors program that is specifically geared towards my major.
I also looked forward(use another phrase. for example "seek") to
thea chance to assist a professor with his research and study abroad at one of Stanford's overseas campuses.
I think you should work on the organization of the information that you have provided in the essay. I focus on the body. First talk about your educational and professional experiences. Then in the second part of the body connect these experiences to the Stanford University. Why do you want to apply to this university? u can answer this question through two separate paragraphs. In one paragraph write about the academic atmosphere and facilities of the university and in another one talk about campus and other features of the university.Hope the comments help
Regards
Ahmad