Ohhhh - I get it!! Your theme of walls...the powerful imagery of the Great Wall (of China) came to mind upon re-reading your essay (oh - and there was the Berlin wall too.) Some questions, suggestions, corrections (in RED):
it's simply the view outside my boundaries - if you want to use the word outside, it should include outside what... that motivates me to crossget s over the walls.
Why repeat "
every single"? I would get rid of every single one of them (absolutes are a NONO.)
using very single standardsthat tucked away in my subconscious. However, after this time, I began to discover every single meritson in each individual. I found judging people is ridiculous, since every singleeach individual has their own distinguishing feature.
Instead of "ridiculous" (a weak adverb) how about
"self-defeating as each time it puts me back over the all ... or makes my walls go back up?. Can you come up with
We should not view others using our own standard which would inevitably penetrate our own prejudice, and would obstruct us from seeing objectively.
Isn't this sentence a half non-sequitur? Be careful of conflicting or double negatives. Using your own prejudiced standard would NOT penetrate your own prejudice. It would only obstruct you from seeing objectively. So either you go with one or the other:
using your own (unobjective or biased) standards would obstruct you from seeing objectively; or we should view others using objective unbiased standards. Keep it simple!!
Whenever I found myself being trapped in the circle of prejudice, I would expand my vista to letfree myself from this vicious circlelimit to a narrow circle.