Choose an issue of importance to you-the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope-and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation.
In every ecosystem, each and every organism in the system is dependent on every other organism within that ecosystem. Ecosystems can fail and when they do, the effect can be devastating to our planet. How do ecosystems fail? An ecosystem can fail when an organism is taken out of that system because all organisms are equally important. Our Earth's surface is 71 percent water and 29 percent land. Within the 71 percent of water is our planet's largest ecosystem: The Ocean. Saving the whales and other sea mammals can mean saving the ocean. Whaling isn't just an issue for my generation but also for generations to come. As more and more whales are being killed the more our oceans will be in trouble.
Commercial whaling, as we know today, began to expand after the end of World War II. Since that time, the whale population has steadily declined. Unlike many of the other different mammals, whales are not considered a sustainable resource due to the fact that it takes whales a long time to mature. As an example, the Blue Whale one of the many species of whales has become endangered because of commercial whaling and current estimates have the population of Blue Whales at only 1.5 percent of its original population worldwide. To slow down the number of killings and also to regulate whaling, many whaling countries came together to create the International Whaling Commission (IWC) in 1946. The IWC voted to introduce a Moratorium on commercial whaling in 1982. Though the IWC created the Moratorium the system is not perfect because countries continue to whale under the disguise of calling it research.
Japan is one of the main countries that continues to whale. Japanese whalers violate the whale sanctuary set by the IWC and continue to hunt off the coast of Antarctica. Even though it is illegal to kill whales, the IWC allows for a certain number of whales to be killed for scientific research. Many Japanese whaling fleets claim that their hunting is for "scientific research". Yet they package whale meat on factory ships after the whales have been harpooned. This "packaged whale meat," can be harmful to humans due to the high levels of mercury contained in the meat, which can cause many medical issues that can be fatal. Only 25% of the meat obtained by hunting was sold in 2012.
Another example of is the slaughter of dolphins, in some places like Taiji, Japan many dolphins/porpoises are being slaughtered because it is considered "pest control." The fishermen kill these mammals because they compete with humans for fish. Whales and other porpoises are all part of the ocean ecosystem and if we take them out of this system then other parts of the ecosystem will become unbalanced and we do not know how that will effect the Earth's ecosystem.
Whaling is not just an issue for my generation it's an issue for generations to come. Everything in the ocean is dependent on the next. With whale numbers dropping there is a dropping in the ocean's carbon levels, which can affect phytoplankton causing a downward spiral to all aquatic life. An ecosystem can only survive if every organism remains in that ecosystem. Without our oceans our planet as we know it can change for the worse.
Decent essay. Eliminate the irrelevant dolphin example.
The promt asks for an issue that's important to you, you family, etc. You explain the importance of whales to the ecosystem, not you. Pick a topic that greatly affects you, or explain the whale example better.
You seem like a good writer - just ATTACK the prompt :)
