Unanswered [15] | Urgent [0]

Home / Undergraduate   % width Posts: 2

Common App (Extracurriculars/ Activities) essay - comments & suggestions

ksade16 1 / -  
Nov 2, 2012   #1
Charles Dickens once quoted "Reflect upon your present blessings, of which every man has plenty; not on you're past misfortunes, of which all men have some." I never fully quite grasped the connotation of this statement until the fall of my junior year. I registered myself to be a volunteer tutor at an elementary school only a town away. As we began to drive, I immediately took note of how impoverished the surrounding areas became with each mile we progressed. When we finally arrived at the school I was in disbelief. It lacked the warm and colorful characteristics an institution of youth usually possessed. As I tutored the children, I came to the realization that despite their lack of resources, they were still extremely bright, and enthusiastic to learn. I thought on how the previous day I had argued with my mother on how I was the only person who still didn't have an IPhone. It just seemed frivolous sitting in front of children that could barely afford books. From that day on I made it a routine to tutor at the school at least once a week. It is an activity I love, and it has given me the ability to have a new perspective on life.
jineshwar1995 1 / 6  
Nov 3, 2012   #2
That's a really good and touching essay. But i guess you have exceeded the word limit. Try to sort that out and it'll be fine (:

Home / Undergraduate / Common App (Extracurriculars/ Activities) essay - comments & suggestions
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳