Common app short essay - an after school club

this is 108 words and the limit is 150 ; however , i need to add some style to it.

I have hosted an after school club for the elementary division called "Sports Fanatics". We usually stay every tuesday after school and tutor them. we train them dodge ball , soccer , and skateboarding. I a member of People to People International (PTPI). On the other hand I am member of People to People International (PTPI). In PTPI we learn about various aspects of countries. from government and religion to food and sports; chapters develop a social understanding of friends around the world. Chapter members also support exciting initiatives from PTPI world. headquarters, plus have the flexibility to develop their own projects according to their interests and means.

this is 108 words and the limit is 150 ; however , i need to add some style to it.
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As a student i have hosted an after school club for the elementary division called "Sports fanatics". We usually stay every tuesday and tutor students in various sports such as dodge ball, soccer and skate boarding. Apart from "Sport Fanatics", I am also an avid member of the People to People International (PTPI). PTPI is an association in which we learn about the various aspects of a country ranging for government activities to sports. This association has helped develop social understandings of friends around the world. As members, we are also provided with freedom to develop our own projects relating to a countries interest and means.

These activities have helped me understand the workings of different cultures around the world and has also helped in honing my leadership skills.

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