I like computer science as I feel its applications fulfilling.
This sentence does not seem to mean anything. I think you should add a few words to this sentence, because it is going to represent the main theme of the essay.
As my father is a programmer, I had many
experiences opportunities to assist him in his work.
Those "internships" sparked my passion for computer science, for I realized its great potential to improve our life.---very good!!!
To become a programmer, I plan to get a master degree to get comprehensive knowledge of ------- (name the more specified area). it is okay if you are not sure. Name an area of specialization that interests you.
As a sound foundation of math knowledge is essential to pursue higher level of study, University of Waterloo is my ideal choice for its great
emphasize emphasis on math in its curriculum.
Great job!!