Computer Science - applying for ODYLP: Vietnam

(ODYLP): Vietnam is an initiative which brings together a group of youth participants and adult mentors from Vietnam for a three-week, U.S.-based exchange focused on youth leadership, cultural exchange, and volunteerism. I'm answering their questionaires to be chosen as an official member, but still my writing skill and my profile are not that good without the help of you guys. I hope that you will give me some suggestions and plans, even just one question, to accomplish my goal. The deadline is at the end of February this year so time is money

1. What are the academic subjects you are most interested in?
My favorite academic subject is Computer Science. I'm deeply drawn to it because it blends problem-solving, creativity, and logical thinking. I especially enjoy studying topics like artificial intelligence, data analysis, and programming, as they have a profound impact on shaping our modern world.

One at a time please.

Yoiu should be describing academic subjects related to computer science. Computer Science is a field of study. It is not the academic subject. Subjects related to computer science include, but are not limited to Algebra, Physics, geometry, chemistry, computer coding, LLM, and other similar courses. Your response is not tailored to suit the question being asked. You need to revise your response to indicate the subjects, rather than the field of study since the question is related to courses related to the field rather than the field itself.You do not show a true familiarity with the field of interest that you hope to attend the program for. This is clearly seen through the inappropriate response that you provided for this question.

Vietnam has undoubtedly many companies, organizations,.. regarding computer engineering, it would be better if u could specify what and where you aim to do

@Edukid2309
So NVIDIA is hiring employees majoring in programing or computer science in Vietnam, so yeah I set my goal to work at there

@johnydong
you should try to show excitement in your answer to the question, also try adding a personalized example.

for example
I remember finding it fascinating how _____ did all this

Computer science is not an acedemic subject. It is comprised of several difference acedemic subjects, mainly math and programming. Your answer is quite basic too. Everybody loves computer science for that exact reason so try to be make it more personal and narrative if you can.