Conncoll supplement - tell us something about you

I'm stuck at the conclusion. could you suggest any approach for my conclusion?

Please share something about yourself that you have not addressed in your Common Application and that may not be revealed in a recommendation. (250 words)

I have a special interest in all sorts of mysteries. I love to read about the cryptic disappearances of ships and vessels in the famous Bermuda Triangle, or abstruse crop circles on the Britain's barley fields, or enigmatic legends about UFOs and aliens encounters.

I consider those as my intellectual hobby. Mysteries give me a mental break from my daily hectic life. They allow me to spread my wings of imagination and let my brain enjoy moments of freedom. Sometimes I like to imagine how aliens could look like: perhaps a 10-meter giant creature with four hands and probably four legs wearing a dark glassy helmet. Other occasions, I get occupied by the virtual scenario in which tomorrow when I wake up, I will find myself somewhere in Kenya's desert!

Mysteries also help me train my intellectual mind. When I face a mystery, I treat it as a challenge, which I must defeat by understanding it. I feel very uncomfortable if my wonders are left unanswered. I still remember I spent one whole afternoon finding out what was behind the 2012 'The end of the world' phenomenon. The process in which I seek information and make assumption also gives my mind more flexibility and creativity in thinking.

Yet mysteries are still mysterious. I feel happy because I will never run out of mysteries to immerse my mind.

I consider exploring mysteries as my intellectual hobby.

When I face a mystery, I treat it as a challenge, which I must conquer by understanding it.

I feel very uncomfortable (consider a synonym for this? Maybe unsatisfied?) when my questions are left unanswered.

The process in which I seek information and make assumptions also gives my mind more flexibility and creativity in thinking.

Yet mysteries are still mysterious. I feel happy (I think you should use a stronger word than "happy") because I will never run out of mysteries to immerse my mind.

I think you can add a little more about how you feel knowing that there are soooo many mysteries in the world. Does it overwhelm you? Invigorate you? Inspire you to keep exploring?

Good luck!!!