As I went about giving my SATs not too long ago, I would never have though political science to be the major I list as first preference on my application.
Not the best way to start it off, kind convoluted.
around me- corrupt government officials and power crazed politicians.
make sure you use a dash. Also, maybe add another thing? a list of two seems a bit weak. You can get rid of this part if you want to, as the last person suggested but it gives a nice background and a bit of contrast.
Maybe instead of so much "i read" plhrase it in some other way. You use a lot of cliched language, "fast forward" "invoked a passion"
The web is constantly evolving
since you're talking about a web, use another word more connected to web. being built on? expanded? changed? evolving is okay but you can make it sound nice and more connected with the right choice of words