Course 2-A of mechanical engineering department of MIT is an ideal program for me

Although you may not yet know what you want to major in, which department or program at MIT appeals to you and why? (*) (100 words or fewer)

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Course 2-A of mechanical engineering department of MIT is an ideal program for me. I love machines and the fundamental principles on which they work. My desire is to understand these rationales, apply them and disseminate them to the future generations as a professional. I also wish to contribute the people of the world with an easier, an advanced and a prosperous life by creating many chef-d'oeuvre (or should I use masterpieces) in machinery. To fulfill my dream which is to achieve a profound knowledge in mechanical engineering, I need to be bestow from the best engineering school of the world i.e. MIT.

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Please provide any grammatical errors in essay ? Also give your suggestion.

-an easier, advanced and prosperous life by creating
-the people of the world is weirdly phrased... maybe just society?

good ideas!!

easier, advances and prosperous.

i would say, use chef- d'oeouvre.


To fulfill my dream of achieving a profound kowledge in mech engr, i need to be ...
dont use bestow, replace the word.

rew2402

To fulfill my dream of achieving a profound kowledge in mech engr, i need to be graduated form the best....

is this correct ???