Here I am, trying to introduce myself to the school that I want to go to learn more about cartooning is somehow surprising and unexpected.
Are you trying to say that trying to introduce yourself to this school is somehow surprising? or you saying that cartooning is surprising. The ending somewhat hangs there.
I just liked telling stories and building up my own world.
I simply enjoyed telling...
I never thought about becoming a cartoonist or a painter because drawing was just too natural to me.
that doesnt seem to connect? though I guess I can't argue with you.
Later when I entered middle school, I had a chance to read some Japanese comic books and it was just whole a new experience to me.
Keep the tense similar? you talk in present tense, past tense, then present, then past...
I hadn't known that characters on a paper could be felt like they were really talking and moving
I think you meant, I had not known that characters on paper could give readers the feeling that the pictures were talking and moving. ? something like that? Or are you saying something different?
And as much as I've gotten to know that there are many kinds of cartoons all over the world besides Japanese comics, I got into Cartooning more and more.
As I found out that there are many kinds of cartoons all over the world besides Japanese comics, I got into cartooning even more.
Since I liked painting pretty scenes and people, and making stories up, it was just obvious that I was going to be into it.
It became obvious to you right? say "it became obvious to me that.."
I gradually started to dream of becoming a cartoonist.
rephrase: started pursuing a dream? started to form a dream? increased your pursuit of this field?
I firmly believe that all the artworks are about messages.
that all art is about messages*
Whatever the artists intended to put in the artworks, readers get to their own conclusion which may reflect from their own experience.
Are you saying that artists intend to place one thing in their art, but readers get a different message? Or that in addition to the author's message, readers make their owns conclusions that reflect their own experience?
Some people may find themselves in those messages or experience a whole new life through the characters. Isn't it just exciting?
I thought it was just so exciting that some people may ...
As I keep working on making cartoons, I've become to have one ambition which is to meet many people including those who are in the field of arts so that I could learn and share variety of techniques and new thoughts to gain profundity and my own originality to my art works.
run-on. As I continue to make cartoons, I have found an ambition to meet many new people, especially those in the arts field, so that I could learn and share varieties of techniques, as well as find new thoughts to gain profundity and originality to my art works.
I like the topic. It's cool that you've had experience with what you want to do. Focus a little more on what was important about cartooning to you, and why you chose it. About the statement of intent, what did you have to address and talk about? Is this a casual statement, a autobio, or experience statement? what do you have to focus on, because I'm not sure what bases you still have to cover.