Hi guys!
I need help with a conclusion. Feel free to edit the rest of the essay as well.
Prompt: . NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.
Ever since I was little, I've been plagued by a need to satisfy my curiosity about the human body. In elementary school, whenever my dad came home from work, I would always bombard him with questions. I remember in second grade I asked him, "Daddy, why do women have babies, but not men?" Being a doctor himself, specifically a neurologist, my dad was always able to answer my elementary-school questions. At the time, this was enough to satisfy my curiosity. However, now that I'm older, I have much more complex questions about the miracle of the human body that I want to discover. At NYU, I would search for the answers through research. With the help of the prestigious faculty and resources of the city, I would attempt to solve the mysteries of the human body.
Not only do living organisms fascinate me, but so does chemistry. I first started to appreciate this field of science when Mr. Baker, my AP Chemistry teacher, pointed out chemistry's role in everyday life. He taught me that magic isn't behind salt's role in melting ice, but rather, it's salt's ability to lower the freezing point of water. He showed me why fireworks are specific colors and how soap works. He gave me a new appreciation for the world around me, and ever since then, I've desired to understand chemistry's effect on our everyday lives.
I would say cut out the chemistry paragraph and expand on the human body paragraph. Write about specific programs, classes, etc. NYU has to offer that differentiates it from other schools.
