about prompt 1, make sure you answer the ENTIRE prompt. I don't think you answer the second part of it. also, you mention that you are doing all those activities regarding theater, but you don't describe how you will accomplish it.
I found support within my family and friends and along with it a fierce desire to defend myself and stand up for what I believed was right.
four ands :O
if I didn't pursue what I believed and persisted with what I wanted.
vague. What specifically did you learn from THIS experience/situation?
prompt 3. this question is so weird."playing a leadership" it theater terminology :O
Taking an active role in my community and school is very important to me because I believe that by helping out I am not only improving and learning about myself but the community as well.
prompt 4
interests you have pursued outside of your high school classes
you say that you took classes. these were in school or out?
Finally, my interests in other classical and contemporary works of literature have branched to different works.
vague. branched to ...what do you mean?
This is really hard. 100words per answer :O short answers ...not essays right? and do you just choose one? or all of them are required?