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Describe an activity - an English newspaper Huijia Voice


seatoy 6 / 6  
Dec 21, 2008   #1
During my senior high school, in order to enrich campus life, I set up an English newspaper Huijia Voice. The process of setting it up is still fresh in my mind now.

The quality of contributions is the first problem we encountered. Though the content is quite fresh and vivid, the accuracy is far from satisfactory. So we set up a revision group to get rid of any grammatical mistakes and vocabulary misuse. In order to improve the quality, we asked for help from our English teacher, instructing us news writing skills. In addition, in order to stand out the features, we integrate the traditional layout with the lively campus photos and this achieved a great effect.

When the first issue of Huijia Voice reached students, I felt so relieved. Our efforts were finally rewarded with applause from teachers and students. However, another problem haunted me then. The short of fund made it hard to continue the paper. Some group members even suggested giving it up, but I didn't. We could not yield in face of difficulties. As the leader of the newspaper group, I had no reason to quit. After much consideration, I asked other clubs for help. They placed advertisement in our newspaper. In addition, I also sought help from my father, who helped me get some external support from enterprises.

As the saying goes, where there is will, there is way. Despite the difficulties in the process, I gain valuable experience: we have to persist when facing difficulties and to pull heads together so as to get through difficulties. I did it successfully in the past, so I am quite confident that I will make it again in my future studies, work and life.
EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Dec 21, 2008   #2
I'd say you need to add a bit more background. What made you think that an English newspaper would enrich campus life? How exactly was it meant to accomplish this goal? How would you know if the goal was being met? I'm guessing that since you specified that the newspaper was in English, then the school was located someplace where English wasn't the students' first language. If that is the case, then you need to mention that somewhere.


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