I want to give you a feedback about your overall essay.
Firstly, "layout" is very important! you should divide your essay into several parts
This "good life" is defined differently and specifically for each individual, of course, as everyone is unique in their values and understanding.
secondly, if I'm not mistaken, you have double verb and for the italic words above, you do not have an object. as I can guess it more likely to be "passive voice" or you just remove "is" then it is clear.
overall, it's great essay. good luck! :)