I always find it difficult
--> I always FOUND it difficult...
re helping me but never cross my mind to try it myself.
--> helping me but it never crossed my mind...
This continues till
--> This continued till...
This continues till middle school when I was pretty much not a good student.
--> That's pretty vague. What's not a good student? But I don't know if you should even write that...
From the start, I wasn't happy on the situation
--> From the start, I wasn't happy with the situation...
They told me for me to become successful; I should try doing things on my own and work hard to make those things better.
--> They told me for me to become successful??? They told me how to become successful?? I dont know...
Hmmm, what i keep thinking is that success isn't really taught or anything like that. Parents can guide you but they can't really show you for your own success. Do you get what I'm feeling? Success is something that can be defined very differently from person to person.
--> oh and what do you mean by things? Maybe you can describe something specific.
I always promise myself to prove my GPA every semester, and through that lesson my parents thought me, I have been able to achieve those goals.
--> I always promise myself to improve my GPA every semester. And through...
--> Umm what exactly is that LESSON your parents taught you? I think you are referencing it to "how to be successful" but even then you don't mention the lesson.
me dreams of becoming a Pharmacist a reality.
--> MY dreams of...