I have always viewed my parents as a single person, a force driving me towards academic success.
Add one more sentence to that first paragraph to establish this notion of a "person" comprised of your parents. It is a good idea!Before I started
my secondary education, my parents gave me various classes of speeches.
As a result, there was a drop in my academic grades as I began to lack seriousness.
Once again, my parents were proud, but I
didn't expect any praise
This was because it was them who deserved to be praised. --- very good! Without their guidance, I wouldn't have gotten good grades in my final exam.
At the end, talk again about the single "person" that your parents represent in their role as a guide for you.
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