'I am a much disciplined fellow' - to your future roommate

Greetings my future roommate! I am an Indian (just incase you were wondering). In particular, I belong to the Punjab region and that makes me one of the 125 million Punjabis on this planet. In my introduction, I am a foodie, a very talkative person (indeed), a very good listener too and most importantly a great friend.

Going further, I am a much disciplined fellow. So don't be surprised if you wake up in the morning and eyewitness someone cleaning our room (that would be me). Academics is one of my top listed priorities and I like it better when there's not much noise around me (music is an exception). I am not a complete science geek but then I can't defer the fact that anything with science in it (which is pretty much everything) amazes me more than any other thing on this planet.

I don't play any particular sport but instead I play almost everything I like. Moreover, I like hitting the gym twice or thrice a week (that's not a priority but a choice). I am a very gregarious person, I like going out with friends and I like shopping (books and DVD'S). It might sound awkward but I have more books than clothes and I am quite confident that I have seen almost all the TV series possible, you name it and I have seen it (undoubtedly we can share those).

In my leisure activities department, I love being eco friendly. Almost all the things in my house are currently running on solar power only because I wanted my parents to adopt the technique. I am quite a cook as well. I like experimenting with new stuff (as much as I love eating) although I don't cook very often.

In the end I want you to know that maybe I sound kind of crazy right now but I assure you that once we start living together, you will love my companion and vice versa. Till then Good Luck

Hi, I quickly scanned through to correct a few stuff. Hmm, m not really a grammar person so dun accept everything I changed unless you agree with it...Also, I suggest that you can work on the transition between the different things that you mention.

Btw, I like how you end the essay. And I find this short essay engaging as well. Good job!

Greetings my future roommate! I am an Indian (just incase you were wondering). In particular, I belong to the Punjab region and that makes me one of the 125 million Punjabis on this planet. In my introduction, I am a foodie, a very talkative person (indeed), a very good listener too and most importantly a great friend.

Going further, I am a much disciplined fellow. So don't be surprised if you wake up in the morning and witness someone cleaning our room (that would be me). Academics is one of my top listed priorities and I like it better when there's not much noise around me (music is an exception). I am not a complete science geek but then I can't defer the fact that anything related to Science (which is pretty much everything) amazes me more than any other thing on this planet.

I don't play any particular sport but instead I play almost everything I like. Moreover, I like hitting the gym twice or thrice a week (that's not a priority but a choice). I am a very gregarious person, I like going out with friends and I like shopping (books and DVD'S). It might sound awkward but I have more books than clothes and I am quite confident that I have seen almost all the TV series possible. Just name one and I'm sure that I've seen it (undoubtedly we can share those).

In my leisure activities department, I love being eco friendly. Almost all the things in my house are currently running on solar power only because I wanted my parents to adopt the technique. I am quite a cook as well. I like experimenting with new stuff (as much as I love eating) although I don't cook very often.

In the end I want you to know that maybe I sound kind of crazy right now but I assure you that once we start living together, you will love my companion and vice versa. Till then Good Luck

thank you very much for the help
i think u scanned it well!