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During my freshmen year, I picked up the art of writing drabbles. Drabble is a short writing which limited to 100 words or less. With that limitation, drabble can't cover a lot of information, but that doesn't mean it can't arouse strong feelings in the readers. I like writing drabble; it is more challenging. A masterpiece of art with only 100 words sometimes can shake the readers' emotions stronger than any average books-long novel.
Writing is the hobby which the more you do, the better you are. I write at home, on the bus, at school, while waiting. I write. It's my peaceful moment. Many times I just write because I feel the wave of inspiration, as it came from just a glimpse of images: a mom holding her daughter, a smoking man, and a skating boy on the side walk or an aged couple walking hands in hands. Once in a while, I write to escape my world: to become someone else in a few moments. As I put myself in their shoes, I tell their story, their moments. I became them in my drabbles.
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Okay so I hope this helped, i tried. It's not a great essay but it's okay..
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