The Dragon Within

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i need help with this essay. I have wrote the idea of my essay i just need help writing a essay..
instruction for this essay is :
write a 500 word essay in which you identify and analyze your dragon; explain what journey you must take this school year to conquer your dragon. How can you slay your dragon through a self- imposed journey? what must the journey entail?

As Jimmy Dean once said "I can't change the direction of the wind, but I can adjust my sails to always reach my destination". Sometime in life, we have dragons that we need to kill in order to achieve something whether it is trying to learn new language or learning to deal with stress. Regardless of how big or small a dragon has been set.

There are many dragons that I would like to defeat during my senior year. The biggest dragon to be stain is to graduate. Graduate to me is a dragon that I would like to defeat. I need to stay focused in all I do. To make sure I do all my homework, and make good grades on tests, going to all my classes could help me defeat this dragon so I don't fall behind. If I do well in all classes then graduation shouldn't be a problem.

Second, dragon I'd like to stay is the SAT dragon. I want to get at lease 2100 on SAT so I can have more college options. This will help me get into some college I want to attend. To succeed at this task I will do everything in my power to achieve this goal. This is just another deadly dragon that I must slay before high school.

Finally, I normally just do the bare minimum to get a passing grade. This will play a major rule later in my life. To do things ahead of time and not last minute. Being lazy won't help me in my future. I will work on my lazy dragon throughout the year to do better.

I will complete my senior year meeting all the requirements and have fun along the way. To do this I need to be part of the school and stay involved in it. I have to come up with ways to do so and they are to join clubs, organization. I will have to look into groups that I would enjoy and willing to spend my time on and also meet people in those groups and get to know them.

I hope to graduate with a GPA of at least a 3.7. it seems unreachable and far away. One way I have vanquish these obstacle was to ignore the big picture and focus on the task at hand. To complete each six week with all A's. Procrastination laziness and slacking will be no more. They will only make it difficulty to achieve my goal. I have developed many techniques ti increase my knowledge and understand of all subjects, so I can make excellent grades in them. I will study everyday for every class at home, thus ensuring I will make good grades on assignment given. I will pay attention in class and be an active participant in the lesson, take down important parts of the notes.

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Very cool, very funny - some typos you need to correct, but ideas are all bang-on!!
Suggest you start first slaying the third dragon (of laziness) and the next two will likely fall from a domino effect!!
Best of all is that you have a great sense of humor, so maintaining this above all will help you vanquish the dragons!!

good luck in your formidable conquests!!