I am applying to virginia tech and I want to get my essay checked before the revision.
The prompt: If you could have any superhero power what would it be and why?
The limit for length is 250
Many people have a dream while they are sleeping. The dream has wide range of nature from freighting to happy. In our daily life, people are constantly dreaming and imagining about their ideal life even though they know that it is hard to achieve. That is why they have a dream that reflects one's unconscious emotional state and life goal. The superpower that I want is the ability to make one's dream to the reality. My goal with this ability is to reduce the gap between the rich people and poor people. There are hundreds and thousands of young people who cannot achieve their goal or find their career even though they work really hard in the university. Contrast to that, there are young people who do not care about their job and money because their family already has everything. Young people without rich family get poor reward compare to the amount of effort that they have put in. Because of this, many people say that the life is unfair. I agree that life is unfair so I want to change this. To me, fair world means people get what they have done for it. I just want to reward those people who worked hard but did not get the reward. Therefore, I cannot actualize dream of people who wants to achieve their goal but do not give an attempt to earn that. (233)