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Dreams about a medical profession - I'm ambitious to expanding my knowledge about biology at Queen's


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Jan 2, 2015   #1
Is there anything I can change. Im scared that some of the sentences dont make sense. Can someone please edit .

Throughout my life I have always shown a strong interest and passion towards biology. Biology's miscellany of fascinating topics causes it to be the focus of my curiosity. Therefore, I'm ambitious to continue expanding my knowledge about biology at Queen's in hopes of one day fulfilling my dream of pursing a medical profession. Queen's exceptional clubs, diverse student body and outstanding school spirit makes it the most ideal situation for not only my academic success, but for the best university experience outside the classroom.

I am a person who takes great pride for my education and my educational success. Thus, I have developed strong time management and organization skills. As I had to tackle both working at a part time job and maintaining high school grades for most of my grade 11 and 12 years I have strengthened these key skills. One of my goals is to practice both these skills into my life at Queen's as it will strongly benefit me academically.

I also want to converge and collaborate with the Kingston and school community. My goal at Queen's is to engage in some of the many incredible clubs and teams that they offer. Throughout the wide selection of extra-curricular activities at Queen's I am particularly interested in Queen's Medlife and QSIMS. I feel that I can learn and contribute best at these club as they complement my aspiration of pursing a medical profession.

In my years after university, I will apply the knowledge and skills that I have acquired during my time at Queen's into my medical profession. I hope to one day use these attributes to study and discover varies solutions to world problems.
wai019 4 / 10 3  
Jan 2, 2015   #2
Is there a word limit? If you have extra space maybe you can research the program you are interested in and why that can help you pursue medicine and what you can contribute to those programs.


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