'Education and student ratio' - Lehigh supplement question-why Lehigh

Since the time I started my preparation for a US education, I was constantly reminded of how the whole process of getting into a University resembled a complex maze and after giving my SAT's ,I too reached the same conclusion.I was completely lost in the application process, not even knowing which Universities to apply to.The only thing I was sure about was that I wanted to pursue Engineering in University.So I started from scratch,searching for the highly recommended and top rated engineering Universities of US.I then cut down that list to only those universities who provided financial aid for international students as my parents are not in a financial state to pay for my abroad education.When going through the websites of these specific universities,I fell in love with one of them,the Lehigh University.Many reasons attracted me to this university.First and foremost of them all was the level of education imparted by Lehigh.It's low student teacher ratio and highly accomplished professors gave a sense of relief even to my parents who have relatively less knowledge in this area.Other major reasons were the various campus resources available for students like the Career Services which relieve the extra anxiety and pressure that a student has to go through.What was even more appealing to me was the health and the safety and security measures that are present in the university which gave an assurance to me that I can live in Lehigh as tension free as in my home.If admitted,I'll try my level best to give back to the university what I owe by participating in various social and academic communities and try and help those who are less fortunate than us.I'll make sure that my deeds and doings do no harm to the reputation of the university and instead people see me as a true Lehigh student.

i don't think it delivers your strong desire to go to Leigh.
maybe some more specific programs in Leigh that you really want to pursue?
and i don't think "not do harm to Leigh's reputation" makes a good closing. do some change :)