serdarovez 10 / 33 3 Feb 10, 2013 #1How do you envision your studies at COA fitting in with your overall educational and career goals?The Awareness of being a citizen of one of the countries with the highest unemployment in the world has never satisfied me. I have always tried to bring some changes to my Motherland but my impacts have only laid in the small corners of my town. My dream to improve green technologies in Turkmenistan made me follow the path to COA with its strong systems to inducing leadership and intellectuality in every student teaching them to take up challenges and never give up, become a worldwide citizen, get useful knowledge and skills in all areas.Please can you check my grammar.And do i answer the prompt ?there is a 500 characters limit.Any critics are welcomed :)Thank you!
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592 Feb 11, 2013 #2I find hard to find a link between the unemployment issue and your desire for introducing green technologies in your country. I feel that is missing in your answer. Also I wish your focus is set more on your studies at COA and the career goals.
