Good editing by Turbina : )
My country has three main areas each of whose residence have their own specified voice and tone.
This is not very clear. Are they three types of communities?
When their laugh burst out loudly, my tears dripped.
As their laugh burst out loudly, my tears began to roll over my cheeks.Yet no one saw me cry because I did not let them think I was a coward.
Yet no one saw me crying because I did not wish them see me as coward.For months later, I had spent most of my time on studying and I got the first place in the class.
After some months, I grabbed the first place at the year end examination.