Hey.... this is what I just said in a thread and it applies to you too :D
"First, what is the topic of this essay. It is important for us to know the topic or the prompt so that we know what it expects from you and also we can check whether your writing is aligned with those requirements. Make sure include that with your essay . Even now, it is good if you can post it here for others to know to earn more meaningful feedbacks"
so I hung there, in mediocrity. I didn't think to do anything about the situation as I'd thought it unchangeable.
So I just let myself in that situation believing it cannot be altered for any better.[(B.E.C.E.), my first external examination]
With my Basic Education Exams [(B.E.C.E.) my first external examination] fast approaching, I decided to put a little more effort into my academic work.
However, for my Basic Education Exams (B.E.C.E.), the first external examination I took, I decided that I should put a little more effort to get better results.