Hey, I also have a few ideas for things you can edit.
I grew up in a small town in Colorado where their was was only a few diversity's in our culture. Everybody pretty much conforming to what they thought others would find expectable
I grew up in a small town in Colorado, where
there was very little diversity in our culture. Everybody pretty much
conformed to what they thought others would find expectable.
This was amazing to me it was at that point in my life that i knew that i wanted to learn first hand as many different cultures as I possible could.
This was amazing to me
as it was at that point in my life that I knew that I wanted to learn
firsthand about as many different cultures as I
possibly could.
:)