aylmerjeong 1 / - Dec 30, 2011 #1Hi there!I am international student and prepare for U.S college transfer now.This is my extracurricular activity essay on common app.Please read this and points out mistakes or more better revisions.Thanks.---------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------Last two years, I always become nervous and proud myself when our newspaper is printed from print center, for I had taken a charge of editor in university press. From subject of articles to trivial typo mistakes, all of criticisms, admonitions and commendations point to me and I have to take a responsibility to the results. Having a responsibility for university newspaper helps me to be mature mentally and to grow into exemplary adults. And it was precious and valuable experiences to have opportunities to write articles about business and economics sections, related to my economics major. When I wrote about current political and economic issues, I felt like I became an economic expert. Also, when I wrote columns about social issues and matters, I felt like I became famous and personally favorite columnists, Paul Krugman and Christopher Hitchens. I have no doubt that these experiences will act as a catalyst to study major and inspire my future career.
SeniorMel 7 / 45 Dec 30, 2011 #2For the last two years, I have always become nervous and proud of myself when our newspaper is printed from print center , for I had taken the position a charge of editor in the university press. From the subject of articles to trivial typo mistakes, all criticisms, admonitions and commendations come frompoint to me and I am responsible for the results . have to take a responsibility to the results. Having a responsibility for the university newspaper helps me to be mature mentally. and to grow into an exemplary adult . AndIt was a precious and valuable experience to have opportunities to write articles about business and economics sections, in relation related to my economics major. When I wrote about current political and economic issues, I felt like I became an economic expert. Also, when I wrotewriting columns onabout social issues and matters, I felt like I became famous and my personally favorite columnists, Paul Krugman and Christopher Hitchens. I have no doubt that these experiences will act as a catalyst to study economics and inspire my future career.
