Heyyyyy here is my essay on the topic "Why are you interested in attending the University of Notre Dame?"
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When I opened the website of Notre Dame at first time, the initial footnote of this school left in my mind was "a place to think". Dark color, peaceful campus picture, compact page layout struck me a lot and I began to believe it was the very place I desired to go and live during my valuable college life.
I'm a thinker. I'd like to contemplate and instropect my life from details to future plans. Although I can't figure out origin of the universe and reasons of chemical reactions, I still want to try my best to make everyone around my life feel better. Notre Dame as a Catholic university can offer me greatest spiritual education like theology and philosophy. There is no doubt I will be inspired and guided to think with advanced level. And only at Notre Dame, I can pursue more reflections and explore myself, also my world.