The solutions to world issues cannot be solved
Careful here.. solutions are not to be solved...
The solutions to world issues cannot be
solved found by searching in only a single direction; they often require collaboration from several fields.
Taking a combination of versatile courses will help me develop a unique perspective ---It sounds like the theme of your essay is "pluralism."That is a good word to check out as you work on this.
Typo: everyone want Stanford
Run on sentence: It's not my deeply passionate nature or love of knowledge, or my curiosity, the answer lies within my drive. Stanford is my opportunity to contribute to the world. ---This stuff is abstract and a little to simple. "Drive" is too simple if you are TELLING them you have it. Show them that you have drive by giving a DETAILED plan about what you are going to do in the next few years. Driven people have plans.
Watching those around me suffering from strokes and other neurological disorders has inspired me to find a solution. ----This is good... a specific intention. I wish you would write a whole paragraph about this aspiration.
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