Needless to say, it wasn't the best place to live.
Then why say it? =)
From a very young age, I was exposed to the effects of a lack of education
This could be phrased better.
It was, as if,for the time thatwhile we spoke, I was no longer a young child
As I walked inthrough the gates of Miramonte Elementary School with my blue and white uniform, tattered shoes, Godzilla backpack, crucifix around my neck, and my head held high, the words that my parents spoke resonated so well in my head.
Why didn't they see it? I guess that's just the way it is.
Who are "they"?
With easy-money schemes readily available to those who choose them, education was not the path taken by many
At times, it did seem like the realistic approach to leaving South El Monte
What is "it"?
They were right. Así es, but not for me.
Good closing.
Hope that helps.
Note: I wrote this after reading the first version, site wouldn't let me post, so I'm posting this again, disregard anything you've already changed.