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These family values accompany me wherever I go; RUTGERS U- VIBRANT COMMUNITY


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Sep 3, 2013   #1
Topic: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences.
How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences. (Maximum of 3,800 characters-including spaces.)

My name is Mohd o Uddin, i have been bought up in an joint family, since childhood growing up around people helped me learn a lot about the feeling and understanding of people, respect to everyone and helping others was thought to us since childhood .i bring the same family values where ever i go,

since all of my cousins went for studies in universities across the country they used to come in vacation and share the experiences about the new places,there culture . that made me more interested in different cultures, every year on the family vacation we used to go to different countries that helped me explore the culture of different places,one vacation we went to Kashmir , which is called paradise on earth, it was such a beautiful place with lakes and snow caped mountains surrounding it all the gardens were full of roses,my knowledge about different culture will add to the vibrant community of Rutgers,

Rutgers will not only provide me with a quality education it also has a diverse community with students from well over 130 countries, which will provide me a broader insight of different cultures of world, Attaining knowledge from others is something we can all benefit from, by applying it to everyday life which will benefit the society we live in.

I have learned from my experiences that good leadership and the healthy interaction between the community and its people are both major contributors to the success of society. I have contributed a significant amount of my time to my community, by participating in various voluntary activities, As Rutgers takes part in many voluntary activities i would like to help with what ever way i can using my previous experiences,

Rutgers have many clubs and programs, I will make a contribution to them while furthering myself, as a person.
As a child I was always been interested in technology,especially in computers. That is why I am looking to become a computer engineer. With the great programs provided by Rutgers University, being in this university i think i can easily achieve my goal,

As college helps us as and introductory to the real world and sets a foundation i would like to start my new phase from Rutgers university from which many pioneer and famous people like Apostolos Gerasoulis who is the creator of the Ask search engine have graduated,

marmaria 10 / 30 5  
Sep 8, 2013   #2
dear zafarm
I do not find your writing intresting. and by middle of it, I was bored. you should revise because it had lots of gramatical problems. I mention some of them. you can search in the forum to find relevant written texts and get idea how to conduct your writing.


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