something extraordinary: doctor; lawyer; chief executive officer.
Is that the only way to be extraordinary? I had better get to work learning medicine...
This is a great piece of writing.
Here is an error:
...opening an
entirely new gateway to my dreams.
Dissatisfied with the company's misleading and
ineffective commercials, I would always figure out an alternative way ...---- just an idea.
Wishing everyone to have the best of the best is my lifelong dream and dedication. nope. Look at this sentence again. I think you can do better.
This is very good, but it has too many words:
To propel smaller, unnoticed companies' brilliantly designed products into the spotlight they deserve, as a dreamer I will make best use of my talents and
abilities as a stepping stone in starting a fresh new chapter of their soon-to-be contribute to their successful future.
I am impressed! Please use your great writing ability to help other people here at EF.
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