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Favorite word - "Hey!" Supplement writing UVA


zeyel 1 / 2  
Dec 30, 2015   #1
"Hey!" It takes 3 letters to start a friendship. "Hey!" 3 little letters with a big meaning. Universal sign of "Let's start talking and be friends.". Everybody understand 'hey". I always greet people in the subway or say "Hey" to random people while walking down the street. It is my favorite word. It's soft and glides in your mouth like a candy, leaves a sweet taste and satisfaction. We humans are meant to be social. We cannot survive alone, we crave companionship. To fulfill that craving, "Hey" is the best solution. "Hey" brings people together, not only does it bring people together, it merges their mind too. Making the world a better place to live. I love the way such a little word can help us move forward with our lives, help us evolve.

Every living mechanism have "Hey". Dogs smell each other and bark, birds chirp and fly, ants touch antennas. That is how society grows.

I need about 100 words more. I am not a native speaker so I might have mistakes. Please point them out and help me improve them. What should I add? Thank you!
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Dec 30, 2015   #2
Elif, here are some ideas as to how you can expand upon your essay. Try to develop some examples for each paragraph topic. Let me offer some sample suggestions based upon every every paragraph subject that you can discuss.

"Hey!" It takes 3 letters to start a friendship. "Hey!" 3 little letters with a big meaning. Universal sign of "Let's start talking and be friends."

- How did you use these 3 letters to strike up a friendship with someone? Strengthening this claim will be based upon personal experience on your part.

Everybody understand 'hey". I always greet people in the subway or say "Hey" to random people while walking down the street. It is my favorite word.

- When you say that everybody understands the word "Hey", try to offer an explanation as to how other people might be understanding the word through the reaction it can trigger in the person, the stranger, that you refer to, while walking down the street.

To fulfill that craving, "Hey" is the best solution.
- Why do you think that? Explain what you mean either through logic or an example.

If you expand upon those points in your essay, you should be able to easily come up with 100 words or more to fulfill the prompt requirements :-)


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