Name the secondary school teacher
It says name her...I think you should name before explaining why, if you havent.
I want to explore, to stroll down the Carleton Arb and lay in (is it lay in or lay on?) the green of the Lyman Lakes
what do you mean the green?green landscapes? Im just wondering.
I have thirst for knowledge.
I have a
thirst for knowledge
My immutable attraction to Biology makes me consider Neuroscience a great possibility for my future
Wouldn't it be better as ,makes me consider that Neuroscience is a great possibility...
Why are you interested in Carleton College and how did this interest develop?
You havent finished? Im asking because you didnt describe how the interest developed.Just why.
Well written and clear answers. Nothing which needs to be necessarily changed. Just two questions which aren't fully answered.