welc2774 3 / 5 Aug 28, 2012 #1Issue of importance intro.My first semester of college, I remember talking to my mom about her own college education and career. I learned that after almost three years of higher education she just simply gave up and dropped out. Puzzled why she would drop out just a year before completion I asked simply, why? She told me that her thirst to work was more than her desire to get her degree. As she explains her mistake made over two decades ago, I can see the regret in her face. Although she has had the same job for 22 years, recently before our conversation she had been demoted and replaced with someone with a degree. This taught me the importance of not only going to college but more importantly about completing college.
whoami 2 / 4 Aug 28, 2012 #2Manday,you have started with a good topic for the essay.Your introduction is good.Think carefully on how u are going to continue you essay and make it coherent.Continue with your essay and do post the complete one.
bianca200994 - / 2 Aug 29, 2012 #3nice essay but i have to see the rest before i can make my final judgement or correctionbut so far so good
elizabethva 1 / 1 Aug 30, 2012 #4I suggest this last sentence: This taught me the importance of not only going to college but also about completing college, which is very important.