Why me and why FIT? The next step for a bright future

Hello, i been straggling with this essay all day, i need help to see if i am going to the right direction, it is no finished yet, any suggestion for a interesting finishing touch will be great, thanks you.

FIT, the next step in a bright future, why me and why FIT? This is a tough question to answer because there are so many reasons why I choose FIT. According to the Middle States Commission on Higher Education "FIT is a leader in career education in art, design, business, and technology, with a wide range of programs that are affordable and relevant to today's rapidly changing industries", and this is one of the multiple reasons why will attendant to FIT.

Three years ago when I first stepped on NY City, I understood that I was in the right place at the right time. However, I also realized that nothing would come to me without my effort and enthusiasm. Nonetheless, at that moment I had very little knowledge of English, a huge desire of achieve a bachelor degree and the big dream of became an Advertiser. In a few months, I was enroll in college, the second step in the list of to do as I usually call it, the first two years of a race that it will drive me further into the future that I desired.

Since that moment, my life starts running like an amazing roller coaster of emotion with a variety of curves that represented the first attempt that I have to accomplish to achieve my dreams. The first step was changing my lower English level, improve or even better learn English as a proper native of speakers, something that proudly I achieve it although I still have a long way to go. After that it came the moment to take action and decided what I should spend the rest of my life doing in other words, what will be my future?

For previous experiences I was complete sure that my path was in the advertising fields, pursue people of take decision, change people preferences or even create my own ideas and share it with the world and at the same time create a different, that is like music for my ears. However, the real question was where I will be able of learning all abilities and skills necessaries to be competitive in the capital of the world, and the only way of having an accrued response for that was through research. After a wild, I finally get the combination of classes that was looking for, and that was Advertising and Marketing communication.

The next question is why that career, how I take that final choice. Just looking the course description in the curriculum for that career I can imagine what I going to learn from each class and how I going to use the knowledge. For example, I am going to start with "advertising and promotions", right away I will have the opportunity of learns strategies, and the diverse methods to integrate any campaign to different sectors, and that will be just the beginning.

On the other hand, the course that I am more excited to take is Magazine Journalism, many people use the phrase "Don't judge a book by its cover" but I take those works and make them, literally I judge a book by it cover that why I am truly passionate about editorial design.

This is hard to responserespond because more thethan one reason came to my mind but probably the biggest one it is because FIT is one of the principal goals in my life.... what do you mean by "principal goal"?

This is a tough question to answer because there are so many reasons why I choose FIT.
And this is just one of the multiple reasons why FIT is my first choice to complete a BS in Advertising and Marketing communication


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Three years ago when I first stepped on NY city ,

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Thanks you very much for your help, i made the changes that you told me.

I understood that I was in the right place at the right time. However, I also realized that nothing will come to me without my effort and enthusiasm.


That time I had very little knowledge of English ... what do you mean by desire and dream?


... this is not clear ... I think you better rephrase this part