NYU supplement.
Hello I'm new here but please help me out!!
it's supposed to be within 500 words but it's 532 words now so please help me out to delete some parts and grammar mistakes!
In the year 2050, a movie is being made of your life. Please tell us the name of your movie and briefly summarize the story line.
Juna saw a flashlight through a scale. Then she was in a world she knew before. She was surrounded by neon lights, busy streets, and many human beings. Then she found a girl walking with a starbucks' coffee and earphones plugged in. The moment Juna saw her she understood where she was. Juna was not in year 2020 but she was in year 2010, when she was a senior.
Juna went to international school in Japan until 12th grade then graduated at NYU and she became a busy business lawyer who works for one of the biggest fashion brands in the world. She always felt her dream came true and her life was fulfilled. Her everyday routine starts by waking up at 6:30am every morning to get a cup of coffee and to open up "Business Week". Then she heads to her company and work until she thinks it is perfectly done.
One day after a meeting with her client, she met her old friend, Hannah. Then they ended up doing a typical long-time-no-see talk and heard how Hannah was doing art as her career with passion. After Juna got back to her home, She felt something was missing in her. But she did not what that was. Not an object but something more. Without thinking anything, she went to her garage and looked for her old junks. In bottom of the box, she found her aged camera. She felt some kind of aura when she held her camera. Then she looked through the scale and clicked to take a photo.
Juna saw a flashlight through a scale. Then she was back in Tokyo 2010. She did not understand the situation she was in. She thought she was dreaming but when she found 18 years old Juna walking towards her friends, Juna felt relaxing. Juna walked towards young Juna like she was manipulated and introduced herself as "Jena" who graduated the same school as young Juna. That was when they first met.
It was difficult for "Jena" to talk to herself but it was the most interesting thing for her to experience. As time goes by young Juna and "Jena" became good friends who can talk about anything to each other. They spent so much time like if they were best friends from long time ago. Young Juna talked about a boy she liked, what she liked to do on the weekend or complained about her school but with full of passion. When "Jena" went to young Juna's facebook page she found a quote, "Jump out the window if you are the object of passion. Flee it if you feel it. Passion goes, boredom remains.--- by Coco Channel." Then Juna finally realized what she was missing in her.
Passion. That is what she needed in her. By looking and talking to young Juna, she learned and remembered so many things she forgot such as what she was dreaming for and how she had passion. Juna picked up her camera and she clicked to take a photo. Then she saw a flashlight through the scale again. She was back in 2020 living with full of dreams and passion for her future.
Sorry, I hate to break it to you, but if you reread the supplement, the 2050 movie question of the supplement is supposed to be a "short answer". It's 500 characters, not 500 words. Which means you need to shorten it down to about a paragraph...
If you remember movie synopsises of today's movies, such as "Avatar" or "Twilight", you'll get how short the response is supposed to be. I suggest that you write something like "Title- the story of a young person living through ... and how she ... finally coming to... etc."
