I finished, I need some imput and help with proof reading. Please!:
When I first looked at the essay and read Florida State's motto I realized that this philosophy is a part of everyone's life and they may not aware of it. I know that my parents and my grandparents have taught my brother and I this philosophy and it has always been expected of us. The balance of the three elements, "Vires, Artes, Mores," are essential parts of my life.
I have been fortunate enough to be a part of a high school community that excels in both athletics and academics. Through my four years there I have grown and matured in so many ways. Academically I have been pushed to reach my greatest potential and be all that I can be. In athletics I was told everyday for years that what goes into practice should be nothing more than your absolute best. I learned I should not only apply these words in school or on the court but in all aspects of my life. Playing a varsity sport in high school is all consuming. You are always expected to be there and be ready to play hard. The most strenuous part of it is always remembering your academics are as important as your athletics. Keeping your grades up while having so much on your plate is a challenge but it is reachable with hard work and determination.
An art teacher, an architect, a musician, a sculptor, a few graphic design artists, a painter and a photographer. These are the people who have surrounded me my entire life, they are my family. Artistic talent has been a constant in my upbringing. Not only the physical concept of art but also the creative minds and personalities of artists. The idea that beauty is in all that we see and we do is a strong belief in my household. It has taught me to appreciate even the smallest of things. I have seen the kind of passion and commitment it takes to accomplish a work of art. That kind of drive has helped inspired me to never give up.
As a small child I learned not only right from wrong but that everything we do can somehow effect the people around us. My mother has always been the voice in the back of my head reminding me the importance of social justice in the world. She has always told me it is my moral obligation to help others and to give back to my community. Between home and school I have been a part of many service projects and through them I have learned first had how important it is to serve others in our lives.
Through my four years of high school my strength, skill, and morals have helped me become the person I am. Through the traditions, academics, and my desire to be part of the Florida State family I know I can become the person I want to be.
You posted this essay and I edited that one for you as well. This is why multiple postings of the same essays are disruptive; it wastes a lot of time searching for them and organizing them. Next time, please only post your questions one time in one forum.
