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"the future sexualization of men" - Stanford intellectual vitality


clamchowder 1 / 9  
Dec 28, 2010   #1
Prompt: Stanford students are widely known to possess a sense of intellectual vitality. Tell us about an idea or an experience you have had that you find intellectually engaging.

Here's the intro:

I wonder about the future sexualization of men. It is an undeniable fact that women are often portrayed by the media as objects to be used by men. With the rising gay movement, is it possible that men will be used to sell objects just as frequently as women? In today's politically correct world, should viewing other humans as tools to one's pleasure even be an acceptable action? The use of an physical attractiveness to encourage others to purchase a product could be seen as a demeaning action where the body is abused for commercial profit. Since this issue is less discussed by male groups, I look to feminists for their positions on the subject.
richardaddo 1 / 12  
Dec 28, 2010   #2
is it possible that...
The use of an physical attractiveness...
where the person is looked upon solely for his or her body. Here, I think you are not getting your message across properly. I don't understand what you are trying to say. May be, you could eliminate that part of the sentence.

I am also applying to Stanford but I still haven't decided what to write about. I must say you have a nice idea there. Just work on it and you will be great.
knattagh 3 / 13  
Dec 28, 2010   #4
I like this, because it says that your able to think on your own. Reading this I can picture a young an sitting and analytically thinking about the future.

I recommend that you use the second half of your essay to write about an actual experience, I assume that you will write about your conversation with the feminists.
OP clamchowder 1 / 9  
Dec 28, 2010   #5
thanks!
And yes, it just looks at feminist views of the subject, but no actual personal experience :/

I'm female, btw.


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