Georgia Tech and Purdue Supplement.

Georgia Tech(150 words):
Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech and what do you hope to contribute to our community? (150 word limit)

Georgia Tech is my top choice to study CS because it is consistently tops rankings, has a separate college for computing providing separate attention to the subject, and a multi-dimensional academic curriculum. The system of 'threads' and 'roles' will help me to customize my academic path. I believe GT would help me reach my goals that are to excel academically and extra circularly. At GT I would get plethora of opportunities that were lacking in my school curriculum. The 'ESM' club is where I can delve deeper into video gaming subject. I too wish to join the programming team that would enable me to hone my programming skill and compete using it. I would also like to explore Robotics through the 'RoboJackets' club. These organizations I feel would give the platform to make a mark for myself within the community. I wish to join GT soon.

Purdue:
What life goals will Purdue help you to achieve--and how? (Respond in 100 words or fewer.)
Throughout my growing up I have been fascinated by the innovations of companies such as Google, Microsoft. Their thought would always leave me wanting to build something that could be used and appreciated by everyone. I want lead a successful organization working for the betterment of the society. I believe a Purdue education would be vital for the success of my plans. Purdue will provide clubs to explore other interests and give me exposure to new cultures. These would carve out an all round personality out of me. I hope to join Purdue soon to give my aspirations a ground.

I want to lead a successful organization working for the betterment of the society.

Georgia Tech is my top choice to study CS because it is consistently tops rankings

Hi Rohan! I think you should spell out your abbreviations everytime during an essay. Also, provide more details in the essay. Organize your essay in paragraphs, but good job anyway!