As they say, everybody needs a stress reliever; golf is my stress reliever.
Maybe make it: As they say, everybody needs a stress reliever, and golf is mine.
It is the perfect way for me to end a stressful week due to school projects or the constant nagging of parents. It enables me to get away from all of this and into a world of my own.
My take on it would be: It is the perfect way for me to end a stressful week of school projects and nagging parents, and enables me to escape from all of this and into a world of my own.
In this world, I no longer have responsibilities like cleaning my room, which is so annoying. My only focus is getting the ball into the hole in the fewest number of strokes. When I start off with the beginning drive, I usually imagine the ball is something that has been bothering me, like my dirty room. I stare at it and scold the ball thinking it is that dirty room. When swinging, I unleash my fury at the maximum level. As violent as it may seem, this course of action brings great pleasure to my mind because, theoretically, I have cleaned my room and my parents are happy. This continues for all 18 holes, and by the end of the day, I have 18 things less to worry about.
In this world, I no longer have responsibilities like cleaning my room, which is... (I wouldn't put annoying here...maybe look in a thesaurus for a similar word, because it might give off a wrong impression). My only focus here is getting the ball into the hole in the fewest number of strokes. I start with the beginning drive, usually imagining that the ball is something that has been bothering me, like my messy room. I stare at it and scold the ball thinking it is that bedroom and, when I swing, I unleash my fury at the maximum level. As violent as it may seem, this course of action brings great pleasure to my mind because, theoretically, I have cleaned my room and my parents are happy. This continues for all 18 holes, and by the end of the day, I have 18 things less to worry about.
Really like the ending so well done!