regardless my major,
all this in one day is very exciting to me
regardless of my major, is very exciting to me
Reed is in the heart of a global power
city called Portland which gives many chances for the person to success,and I will
try to take every chance for success Portland city gives to me seriously .
Additionally, Reed is in the heart of (the global power?) city of Portland, which gives its inhabitants many chances for success.
Aside from your bit about Portland, I could change the college name and it would still be acceptable. Many colleges offer flexible courseloads and many also offer diversity and a "unique" community. Why
Reed? I think it would greatly improve your essay to name specific things about Reed that appeal to you.