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Great education,beautiful campus; What Columbia & why?


mahmoudjendy 7 / 17  
Dec 28, 2012   #1
Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why.1500 words

Columbia is unique university where great education,beautiful campus , and diversity all meet .good education can make one's life better,but excellent education can make people's life around this person better as well. Columbia has a wonderful grassy campus in Manhattan. At Columbia all cultures mixed together to give a unique culture called Columbia's culture.the university emphasize active citizenship and is well-known of its internationalism and study abroad programs.It is also known for its liberal arts education a right brain education by which i can be unique in this world . taking creative writing class in the morning and then economics class in the afternoon regardless my major is a very exciting idea . in the On the other hand Columbia in heart of the world in a global power city called New York city which exerts a significant impact upon commerce, finance,media,art,fashion,research,technology,education,and entertainment is described as the culture capital of the world . i hope that i can enter Columbia and join Columbia center for integrated science and engineering where applied physics, chemical engineering , and electrical engineering all in one place that what i dreamed by .. I always hope to take steps of two people who i admire Edwin Armstrong and Franklin D.Roosevelt . Both of them have achievements that make a great difference in humankind and both were in Columbia. Students who graduate from Columbia enter the real world focused, confident, and ready to face challenges,and one day, I want to be one of these graduates.

what do think ? and thnx for helping
DJ3522 1 / 2  
Dec 28, 2012   #2
Besides the minor corrections, very good essay. Just be a little more descriptive...you kind of sound like a brochure book.
katev 18 / 120 24  
Jan 15, 2013   #3
regardless my major,
all this in one day is very exciting to me

regardless of my major, is very exciting to me

Reed is in the heart of a global power
city called Portland which gives many chances for the person to success,and I will
try to take every chance for success Portland city gives to me seriously
.

Additionally, Reed is in the heart of (the global power?) city of Portland, which gives its inhabitants many chances for success.

Aside from your bit about Portland, I could change the college name and it would still be acceptable. Many colleges offer flexible courseloads and many also offer diversity and a "unique" community. Why Reed? I think it would greatly improve your essay to name specific things about Reed that appeal to you.


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